Category:Clothing descriptions waiting for a rewrite

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This category is for clothing items with descriptions that do not form a natural sentence if you add "He or she wears" in front of it. It has been an RD Tailoring policy since spring 2007 that all clothing descriptions should complete this sentence.

For example, "He wears a band of plain copper encircles the wearers finger" is not a proper sentence, while "He wears a band of plain copper encircling the finger" would be (although it still looks a bit clumsy).

Also the tailor tends to rid of references to "the wearer" since it can be assumed that all body parts mentioned in the description belong to the character in whose profile the descriptions are found.

Pages in category "Clothing descriptions waiting for a rewrite"

The following 7 pages are in this category, out of 7 total.